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Post by SilverEyes on Apr 18, 2004 2:36:35 GMT -5
This is what I get for writing at 2:10 in the morning. -----------------------------------------------------------------------
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Two Three Going to die on the lee
Four Five All you have to do is sigh
Six Seven Say goodbye at eleven
Eight Nine Don’t worry, it’ll all be fine
Ten Eleven Try to turn the clock back to seven
Twelve This is not something you can quell
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 18, 2004 14:59:17 GMT -5
very unusual piece...never seen or heard anything quite like it...i did really like it though..good job!
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 19, 2004 19:25:26 GMT -5
This was unusual and different, however, that made it all the more better, very good.
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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Apr 21, 2004 4:58:16 GMT -5
didn't quite get this one....
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 7, 2004 3:10:36 GMT -5
i actually enjoyed the zoned out write...see what you get at 2.10am? nice, unusual... x rinna x
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