-desecrate-

[leash]

splashing realitys ocean
resist my unshakable force
enter your forbidden essence
purged for so long
quenching my soul
violate the prey
once as beautiful as i
consumed by desire
exploit your shame
and harness whats left
enslave your embrace
make it my command
desecrate your body
emulation your only friend
now lost to the darkness above
subvert enslaved courage
to raw pain
bloody with contempt

[SilverEyes]

"once as beautiful as i"

That speaks to me on so many levels.

[bloodredtears]

i agree with Silver Eyes, that line really captures me too! good job

[Eclipse]

the entire piece just blew me away....I really loved it.

[leash]

thanks guys.. this was actually one of my first poems, so i am especially proud of it.

[Sathien]

wow, really smooth flow.. it's like i'm reading through the poem and images just keep on showing themselves with each line read.. 'tis really good. my favorite line was, as with the others:

once as beautiful as i

that was a killer. well done!