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Oct 9, 2004 20:46:11 GMT -5
Post by beginswithKendsinG on Oct 9, 2004 20:46:11 GMT -5
I give it up so take it away from me I have had enough So break it off of me
A thousand faces keep on laughing How should I cope? How should you know? Every smile sits behind some device Keep your advice, I can live my life Just fine
Another mishap Again at my hands I didn't mean it Ran through you again
A thousand fingers keep on pointing My eyes do not close, I watch the seed grow Every smile sits behind some device Keep your advice, I can live my life Just fine
It takes time For all the pain to rewind So hit play Then watch the way We move through the light
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Oct 11, 2004 23:13:09 GMT -5
Post by T.J. Barber on Oct 11, 2004 23:13:09 GMT -5
Another facinating write. Your work never fails to amaze me at all. I am utterly amazed by the raw image and captivating feeling that your poetry gives off. Good write man, Tj
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Oct 12, 2004 11:53:45 GMT -5
Post by beginswithKendsinG on Oct 12, 2004 11:53:45 GMT -5
yeah the other 2 are kinda weak. I think I had to throw those out there to get to this write. I am pretty hapy with this one. I guess my medium is changing.
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Oct 12, 2004 15:45:12 GMT -5
Post by T.J. Barber on Oct 12, 2004 15:45:12 GMT -5
Yeah, mine does that wuite often. I only wish that I could find a final resting place for mine. But, I guess if we all had a permanent medium we'd all be pretty dull huh??
Tj
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Oct 15, 2004 17:25:06 GMT -5
Post by beginswithKendsinG on Oct 15, 2004 17:25:06 GMT -5
Saying I'm boring?
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