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Post by haggardlilelf on Jun 30, 2004 18:27:25 GMT -5
I wish it would have been Maybe I wouldn't be looking back on the end A sadness that enraptures me Holds me close and just wont let me breathe I wish it would have been
Romeo and Juliet Lovers since the day they met Now theyre thinking If it would have been The saddest words in history Romeo was too blind to see That Juliet Was faking her death And when they gave their lives In fear of life without love They lost what could Could have been
(chorus) What could have been Could change your life Take away some sacrifice Some thoughts at night Wishes That it could have been
A beautiful teenage girl Living in her own cold world Decided her life wasnt good enough At the funeral family cried Gathered together to say goodbye They all had the same wishful thought I wish it could Could have been
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(Bridge) Lovers can change their paths Friends can bring forth a laugh A new age youth can make a difference Just have to put up enough resistance With too much thought you can lose your nerve And when you lose your nerve You'll start to think I wish it could have been
(Chorus)
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jul 19, 2004 1:59:32 GMT -5
Extraordinary work! This really kicks ass, dear poet. The rhymes in this piece are just so natural.
I am suprised that there are no other replies for this work of art.. It's just sitting here untouched. So sad.
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Post by Mikepoet on Jul 22, 2004 22:09:54 GMT -5
I agree with Morgan, again I hear Metal.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Sept 6, 2004 12:15:49 GMT -5
Great song write! Keep it up elf!
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