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Paradox
May 12, 2004 0:14:15 GMT -5
Post by Alex'z Death Chic on May 12, 2004 0:14:15 GMT -5
You break me so slowly you sooth my soul then choke me
I can't breathe its always like this why can't I wake up from this nightmare
I love you I hate you I love you I hate you
you frustrate me aggreviate me just leave me please stay
don't confuse me I'm already confused just tell me you love me...
and mean it... and mean it...
I love you I hate you I love you I hate you
say it that you love me and mean it don't lie...
note: this is sorta confusing but that's what it supposed to be... its supposed to be confusing because its about love.... love is confusing... especially with alex... damn him... we're not talking again... bastard.
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NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
Posts: 454
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Paradox
May 12, 2004 3:42:43 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on May 12, 2004 3:42:43 GMT -5
The paradox of love... do we ever understand when we are in it enough to say we are in it and understand what we are saying?
I really enjoyed how you wrote this, it reminded me of times I have felt like this ... Great job!
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Paradox
May 12, 2004 14:24:10 GMT -5
Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on May 12, 2004 14:24:10 GMT -5
This is very good, I really enjoyed the word flow of this, it would make an excellent song
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Paradox
May 12, 2004 14:39:57 GMT -5
Post by X x K e l Z x X on May 12, 2004 14:39:57 GMT -5
I agree it has great flow, I like the "I love you's and I hate you's", makes for an interesting piece altogether. Great work ADC!
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Paradox
May 13, 2004 10:27:24 GMT -5
Post by Alex'z Death Chic on May 13, 2004 10:27:24 GMT -5
thanks guys
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