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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Apr 22, 2004 22:30:41 GMT -5
I'll never be someone's first priority never me never me...
There's always something better always something better why can't they see you're longing for attention?
Tears of grief fall on you face you will never be someone's first priority
There's always something better always better than you so cry your tears now before they realize
weep dear child don't be afraid shed your tears for me shed your tears for me
and tears of grief will fall on your face coz you will never be someone's first priority
I'll never be someone's first priority never me... never me...
note: to those who are sorta confused, this was written when i was upset and was talking to myself. that's why its written in different point of views.
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Post by KG on Apr 23, 2004 5:40:13 GMT -5
Ah, now this is touching. A grown man should never cry, but this almost did it for me! Congratz!
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 23, 2004 11:48:57 GMT -5
I agree. It didn't grip me as much as Kemleth over there but, it was touching. It had a ora of it's own. It's feel gave it a shine. Very well written...
Tj
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sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Apr 27, 2004 0:24:43 GMT -5
aw....brings back some memories for sure. nice job. you captured a lot in this song.
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 28, 2004 16:24:52 GMT -5
This is sad, and as KG said, touching. Very good.
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