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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 20:30:57 GMT -5
I'm ready to lose control I'm ready to climb the pole Come on baby, give me your best shot 'Cause I'm on fire, yeah baby, I'm hot Take me on, take me down I'll turn you on, and turn you down
chorus: 'Cause I'm your dream girl Spinning your world Turning it upside down Yeah I'm a bad girl Losing control and I love it And I don't want to wake up
Light me up, set me on fire You know, I'm your heart's desire Burn me out, burn me again I'll take you places you've never been Don't walk away from me Your a little shy I can see Just give me a minute or two And we'll be headed straight for the moon
repeat chorus(3x)
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 7, 2004 16:23:52 GMT -5
This is great, it has such a great rhythm and flow to it, awesome song Kelz.
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Post by SilverEyes on Apr 10, 2004 0:31:32 GMT -5
Intense write. I love it.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 10, 2004 16:26:30 GMT -5
Thank you both
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Post by DJ Swaby Baby on Apr 21, 2004 15:53:50 GMT -5
N-I-C-E
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Post by Urban Cowgirl on Apr 21, 2004 15:54:46 GMT -5
Great song Kelz, it's great to read your work again.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 21, 2004 16:07:48 GMT -5
Thank you, that's so sweet Carma.
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 22, 2004 19:08:07 GMT -5
I agree with everyone. I loved the rythym. It's scheme was awesome. None of it was off at all. I enjoyed this piece very much. Great Job Kelly, Tj
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sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Apr 27, 2004 0:23:41 GMT -5
i thought i replied to this already, but apparently not. neways...great song. loved it!
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