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Post by Tempest on Feb 13, 2004 18:32:28 GMT -5
Brink of Insanity
Evil’s misleading sensual seduction has me trapped He laughs at me, enjoying the irony; My shield of innocence Leaving me unprotected. Suffocating in my dreams, Drowning in my bittersweet sorrows, Bleeding from a broken heart Shattered by cruel demons.
-Chorus- Totally numb inside, I’m on the brink of insanity One touch is all it takes Before I shall fall into the endless chasm The darkness is welcoming…
Crying for the grave Blood runs afresh Down milky white wrists Bathed in moonlight Found relief? Oh, but pain is first Delicious, biting, addicting Like knives it courses through
-Repeat Chorus-
Demons inside scream for more blood As it pours out of fresh cuts Soaked in the warm red stickiness Arms fall to sides Curl up and let the pain run free Fly up high Listen to deaths sweet, alluring song Beckoning you to follow
-Repeat Chorus-
The darkness is welcoming...(repeat 3x)
…and the darkness is welcoming…
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 13, 2004 23:56:25 GMT -5
Definitely a dark piece but I like it. It seems like it should be metal or hardcore rock.
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 14, 2004 14:47:41 GMT -5
awesome...i really love this piece..the darkness is really great!
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sweetest17sin
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 19, 2004 0:37:50 GMT -5
yeah, i agree w/ silvereyes. i was thinking the same thing. great piece though!
melissa!
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 20:19:40 GMT -5
This was dark, very poetic, perhaps a bit harder rather than soft, but that's only my assumption from reading it.
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