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Post by John Barnett on Feb 12, 2004 19:35:02 GMT -5
O how I bleed when you don't say goodbye O how I yearn when you don't wink your eye I need a little motivation from you today I need a little something to help me on my way And you just look at me, looking through me Seeing things you only want to see That's not how it's suppose to be
chorus: Why must you tempt me so? Why must you slice at my soul? I don't know why I follow you But stepping with your shadow is what I will do Because I...am...a...lovesick fool
O, this is getting a little too deep for me I can't sleep, I think of you, you're even in my dreams And nothing is as it seems When you and I are talking over things It's not the same, it's real, and I fall apart Because I'm a nervous wreck, and I have a tender heart
repeat chorus
O, O, you just walk all over me O, O, you just slap me around O, O, laugh at me when I fall to the ground You know it turns me on anyway
repeat chorus(2x)
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 20:41:01 GMT -5
hey...another great song here john...i really love reading your songs...i wish i could hear them too! that'd be great! do you have any recordings?? anyway...great job!
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 13, 2004 16:28:25 GMT -5
This would definitely make a great song.
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amberputis
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Post by amberputis on Feb 14, 2004 20:38:36 GMT -5
I can't get over how good your songs are...keep it up, i also really enjoy reading them!!!
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sweetest17sin
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don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 19, 2004 0:32:38 GMT -5
yup, awesome job, i have to agree. this would make an awesome song. you're a really talented writer. i just love all of your stuff!
melissa!
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Post by John Barnett on Feb 24, 2004 15:15:18 GMT -5
I don't currently have any recordings, nothing professional sounding anyways. But thanks for all the compliments, I appreciate them all.
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 25, 2004 15:48:39 GMT -5
John, This is a good write,Thanks for sharing it! ;DJoe
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 8, 2004 19:40:09 GMT -5
This was great John, very well written, I'd love to hear it.
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