sweetest17sin
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don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 1:30:35 GMT -5
For so long I was trapped in my own prison I fought my own war But now it’s time to escape And find what I’ve been looking for
I want to tell the girl in the mirror She’s beautiful I want to be proud of the woman She’s turning out to be I want to know how it feels to love me
I spent all my yesterdays Trying to be the girl they told me to be But today I decided I’m living my tomorrows for me
And each day…
I’ll tell the girl in the mirror She’s beautiful And I’m proud of the woman She’s turning out to be Finally, I’ll know how it feels to love me
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 10:34:11 GMT -5
these are really good lyrics...i can't imagine what it would sound like in song form, but probably be really good...great job!
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 13, 2004 16:19:07 GMT -5
Great lyrics, I think they would be best with a rockish/blues sound.
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amberputis
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~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Feb 14, 2004 20:42:41 GMT -5
I agree! Great use of words, the idea behind this is amazing also.
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sweetest17sin
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don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 19, 2004 0:40:36 GMT -5
thanks! i never thought about rockish/blues, but that sounds like a really good idea...
melissa!
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Post by richie on Feb 19, 2004 10:28:30 GMT -5
lovely words and profound in many ways I enjoyed reading it. best Richie.
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 25, 2004 15:55:42 GMT -5
A great write! I also enjoyed reading this! ;DJoe
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Post by John Barnett on Mar 5, 2004 13:18:02 GMT -5
Great job, very nice!
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sweetest17sin
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don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Mar 5, 2004 13:26:10 GMT -5
thanks!
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 8, 2004 19:38:21 GMT -5
This was amazing, I loved this, I can SO relate to the words in your song here Melissa, great job!
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sweetest17sin
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don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Apr 12, 2004 22:37:27 GMT -5
ty very much.........my name is melissa though ;D
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 13, 2004 19:18:41 GMT -5
Great write Mellissa. I enjoyed this one very much.
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