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Post by T.J. Barber on Jan 29, 2004 19:54:40 GMT -5
This was written to my Fiance. She and I are about to be married and hopefully we will have a wonderful child that I can share this with. Please, enjoy.
"A Fathers Love"
Hush now my baby. Sleep now don't cry. Your daddy loves you. For you I would die. No matter where you are. No matter what you do. I'll be right here waiting for you. You know your daddy loves you. That you know is true. I'll always be here to love and cherish you.
Perfect creation, made just for me. Your beautiful mother. In your eyes I see. And no matter where you go. No matter what you do. I'll be right here waiting for you. For, you know your daddy loves you. That you know is true. I'll always be here loving you.
Our little slice of heaven. An angel in disguise. You were sent from heaven to brighten up our lives. Ohh you know your daddy loves you. This much you know is true. I'll always be there waiting on you. No matter where you are. No matter what you do. You know your daddy loves you. That is what I do.
No matter what you do...No matter where you are... I'll always love you if even from afar..... You know your daddy loves you just the way you are... This you know is true. Cause that's what daddy's do. I'll always be here loving you.
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 2, 2004 22:15:32 GMT -5
beautiful...i wish you much happiness in your marriage and i hope that you have beautiful healthy children to sing this too... great job! i love this whole part especially the line in pink! again, great job!
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Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 3, 2004 10:25:34 GMT -5
Why, thank you Kris. I appreciate that. It took several hours to write this short piece. I wanted it to be perfect. Thanks again for everything, Tj
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Post by John Barnett on Feb 3, 2004 15:10:41 GMT -5
TJ, this is a very nice song. The words are extremely powerful and very touching as well. It's almost like reading your heart and soul, and I'm sure it would sound good to music. Great job partner!
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 3, 2004 19:17:36 GMT -5
Aww, this is so sweet. Oh, and Congratulations!
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Post by richie on Feb 5, 2004 13:19:19 GMT -5
excellent good song to sing at beadtime to a child well done richie
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Post by Beskhu3epnm on Feb 7, 2004 20:48:16 GMT -5
Beautiful poem Congratulations!
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Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 11, 2004 13:39:26 GMT -5
Thank you all for your congrats and feedback. Your all very great members and I appreciate you all.
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Post by amberputis on Feb 14, 2004 20:45:08 GMT -5
this was remarkable! I wish you the best of luck in your marriage and your children to come!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 19, 2004 0:30:49 GMT -5
awwwwwww..........awwwwwwwwwww............awwwwwwwwwwwwww. this was SO sweet! congrats to btw...but no, this was really, REALLY good. it just has such an awesome flow to it, and of course an amazing message. i loved it!
melissa!
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 25, 2004 16:08:25 GMT -5
TJ, This is a beautilful and excellent write!Thanks for sharing it! ;DJoe
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Post by T.J. Barber on Mar 1, 2004 18:42:36 GMT -5
Thanks guys, it's great to get good feedback
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 20:18:08 GMT -5
This was strong and powerpacked with emotion surging through each and every word. Remarkable job Tj, you should write more songs and post them, this one is very good.
Kelz
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Post by Brady Kyler on Apr 14, 2004 18:18:55 GMT -5
This was an adoring write, very intimate and full of love.
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