waiting for the sun (tanka)

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	waiting for the sun (tanka) Aug 4, 2004 10:28:19 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Aug 4, 2004 10:28:19 GMT -5 Citronella wafts Children itching for the burn The countdown begins. Stars blaze rhetoric Just waiting for the sun
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

_black phoenix_ Apprentice .:burning butterfly:. Posts: 76	waiting for the sun (tanka) Aug 6, 2004 20:39:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by _black phoenix_ on Aug 6, 2004 20:39:36 GMT -5 very nice. i really like your word choice, charl1. you captured the moment well. hopefully more people get around to reading this one..
	[glow=silver,4,500]"You can't kill me / cause im already inside you" - Slipknot[/glow]

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	waiting for the sun (tanka) Aug 27, 2004 23:13:05 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Aug 27, 2004 23:13:05 GMT -5 reminds me of picnics and night spent stargazing...great piece!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	waiting for the sun (tanka) Sept 15, 2004 1:38:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Sept 15, 2004 1:38:22 GMT -5 thanks guys! .rk
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'