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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 8, 2004 2:30:24 GMT -5
I see my blood Its crimson stream Is slowly flowing out of me
There is goes All sticky and warm Dripping down, onto the floor
I feel it go I feel life End
And there you go I'm in the coffin In the dirt
All because I found the knife And used it, on myself
But why bother? My heart's already Six feet under
1:26 AM February 8, 2004
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Suicide
Feb 8, 2004 16:50:37 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Feb 8, 2004 16:50:37 GMT -5
awesome piece you have hear...i especially loved the last stanza
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sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Suicide
Feb 12, 2004 1:50:36 GMT -5
Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 1:50:36 GMT -5
oh wow...that was...wow....that was really really good. the ending is wonderful. you wrote this poem so well.
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