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Dec 15, 2004 1:12:00 GMT -5
Post by beginswithKendsinG on Dec 15, 2004 1:12:00 GMT -5
It creeps inside
It makes its way
We are the lost
We are the fake
Cut away and find me, alive
Something so simple, denied
Maybe we need help, strive
Maybe we all need the lie
It stops to breathe
It hopes to come clean
We are the same
We are the obscene
Cut away and find me, denied
Something so simple, died
Maybe we need love, hide
Maybe we all need the life
Our greatest fear is the memory
We go like the end of a symphony
Drift away from the point
Face the note hate the noise
We all go home, then it ends
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Wickedblades666
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I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...
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Dec 15, 2004 7:02:07 GMT -5
Post by Wickedblades666 on Dec 15, 2004 7:02:07 GMT -5
kick ass dude, i wish i could write like that, but i have been suffering from some writers hate, everything i write i feel sucks : /, i need to get over it soon, its driving me nuts, anyway, great poem, i got the impression it was about humans sad point of exsistence, and i love the part about the fear of the memory *laughs*, but that is one view. again impressed by K to the G  |
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Dec 16, 2004 16:09:46 GMT -5
Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Dec 16, 2004 16:09:46 GMT -5
This is very good, I like this a lot KG.
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Jan 14, 2005 3:02:38 GMT -5
Post by beginswithKendsinG on Jan 14, 2005 3:02:38 GMT -5
Hey thanks FOX,
Wicked,
Fear of the memory. What does that mean to you?
Remember when you were young? Are you what you wanted to be when you were that age? Fear of the memory. Don't want to face the expectations that were put on you in the past.
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Jan 22, 2005 7:36:23 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jan 22, 2005 7:36:23 GMT -5
it's always a trip to read you, KG. i hope you come back to read that you have fans...
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Mar 14, 2005 14:01:18 GMT -5
Post by I Have Killed the K, G's next! on Mar 14, 2005 14:01:18 GMT -5
Hey thanks...I never go too far huh?
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Mar 14, 2005 15:36:17 GMT -5
Post by alostandbrokensoul on Mar 14, 2005 15:36:17 GMT -5
Brilliant awesomely expressed!!! Is awesomly a word?? oh well it was awesome!!
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