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Post by Tania on May 27, 2004 4:43:04 GMT -5
I hate the way you breathe I hate the way you eat I hate you in a way I wish I could beat You like an egg So there is nothing At all left I hate you in so many ways I wish you instant death.
Tania
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Post by angel on Jun 2, 2004 22:37:01 GMT -5
niiiiiice. Nicely put without swearing....I like it!
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jun 4, 2004 5:40:18 GMT -5
tania, i love this! invisible was right, this packs a punch even without swearing! x rinna x
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Post by Tania on Jun 10, 2004 4:52:24 GMT -5
Thank you very much for your kind comments about my poem. Tania
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