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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Apr 10, 2005 9:37:11 GMT -5
being with you makes me feel alive but i always feel dead inside so everytime that you leave me i die again and no longer can breath.
so as long as you pull the trigger i know i will love you forever so now just let me die just pull the trigger
i cant take the pain of everytime i breath I love you so much but this world i want to leave
I know you'll feel pain but it too will go away so please just let me die and leave you grief here to stay.
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Post by Seahorse on Apr 14, 2005 23:09:07 GMT -5
This is beautiful, sad, haunting poem. It is so final. Simply lovely. Seahorse.
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 27, 2005 11:33:46 GMT -5
I agree with Seth.... This is a truly haunting piece. It's raw passion and pure emotion is truly inspiring.......... Great write
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