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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Jul 11, 2004 17:57:43 GMT -5
Drops of tears stain my shirt drops of blood stain my skirt my head begins to pound though I hear no other sound the tissue on the bed the blade stained blood red what have I done? as my stomach begins to lundge my wrists start to burn to die is now my turn first it was my brother after him it was my mother my father was never there because he never did care. Dressed in black, as the rain falls down buried alone with no one around no one crys no one weeps as I died while they sleep I fall to the floor my heart beats no more drops of tears stained my shirt drops of blood stained my skirt my head no longer pounds death quiets all other sounds the tissue by my side the blade the reason I died.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jul 15, 2004 21:29:04 GMT -5
whooo you are on an extremely dark roll, i love this. x r x
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Post by Mikepoet on Jul 22, 2004 20:21:31 GMT -5
You are writting as if you are in so much pain. Everything just kind of stoped when I read this. I hope you stay a member here for along time.
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Post by Seth on Nov 9, 2004 13:43:13 GMT -5
Your poetry touches my soul deeply, with your flow of words and its immense emotion, and pain. Another strong, tragic piece by you, I hope that you do stay alive and well, but know that I do know exactly what you are/may be going through...
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