You're Still Here

[Seth]

Even as I see you
You no longer frighten me,
I do feel sorry though,
You can't rest peacefully.

Your death was tragic,
And now you haunt me,
I was your best friend,
Your one and only.

When you appeared,
Right in front of me,
I thought that you had returned,
But I was wrong sadly.

And yet you cause no harm,
As you float around me,
I hope that you know,
That you made me happy.

But you can't leave yet,
Is it all because of me?
Do you remain on this plain,
'Cause you long for me?

[bloodredtears]

very interesting how every 2nd and 4th line in each stanza rhymes throughout all of the stanzas...very good job!

[Chaotic_Thetis]

Felt somewhat basic though i liked where it was going and the piece itself. If you were ever to re-work it, you could try expanding on the imagery so that we as a reader, may envision the poem.

[X x K e l Z x X]

Such a longing piece, it touched me deep, this was incredible, wonderful job!

[Mikepoet]

That is as if you are quite mature and looking at this in a poetic way. It was actually rather beautiful to me.