NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on Dec 7, 2004 3:08:48 GMT -5
This is a poem dedicated to someone rather important in my life. And I pretty much just dare her to read it. Although I doubt she would know what to say. But it is going here just because.
I don't want to love you when you hold it all away I don't want to need the softness of your eyes I don't want to hold you when your tears rip me apart I don't want to smile when you think of a hug I don't want to love you no matter what the reason I don't want to love you so why is it I do?
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I don't
Dec 7, 2004 11:04:31 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Dec 7, 2004 11:04:31 GMT -5
a question i think about alot now a days....i have someone i feel this way about too...it kind of sucks not knowing what holds you to a person....very good piece...short and to the point, i like it alot!
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I don't
Dec 8, 2004 19:10:59 GMT -5
Post by cherryXchapstick on Dec 8, 2004 19:10:59 GMT -5
i hate this feeling. i hate it so much....it feels like you have no contorl over what you're feeling. you simply know you feel it. good write.
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I don't
Dec 14, 2004 19:25:06 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Dec 14, 2004 19:25:06 GMT -5
oh nevermore. i know the feeling. it tears us all apart inside. internalising the torrent of emotion does nobody any favours, so good on you for putting this out here.
i hope she reads it.
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Wickedblades666
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I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...
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I don't
Dec 15, 2004 18:19:47 GMT -5
Post by Wickedblades666 on Dec 15, 2004 18:19:47 GMT -5
isnt it amazing though, how someone can do that to you? makes you think why...
Great write as always
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NeverMore
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I don't
Dec 16, 2004 2:54:14 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Dec 16, 2004 2:54:14 GMT -5
First, I am guess since I posted it where she could not miss it, that she read it, but said nothing
Next.. why do they do it? Because I guess thier heart are just not big enough. Who knows.
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I don't
Feb 21, 2005 23:16:54 GMT -5
Post by luscious on Feb 21, 2005 23:16:54 GMT -5
Perhaps it is not intentional when one draws another into their light but rather just an happening they have no control over...smile.. Nice poem ...from the heart.. Luscious
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