pig
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Post by pig on Sept 17, 2004 6:45:08 GMT -5
chaos. youre (just so) full of it. desicisions mix with doubts and make my head spin. desire breeded through fear to make me vomit. my memory shot at close range with a bullet from a gun. a sticky sense of duty sticking to my sense of fun my index finger ripping sticking skin off of my thumb just because chaos. oh youre (so) full it. unsure of whether time and space are seperate or the same. and yeah, this is the last time i take advice off of the living dead, these answers cant be boring, its what turns my blood so red. but hanging out and hanging down around the place that we both found. ill take for granted the calm of space when chaos fills me up full of it.
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Post by bloodredtears on Sept 19, 2004 13:03:21 GMT -5
that was a very odd poem, and i really have no idea what the point was....but it was amazing writing...it flowed very well and it was so perplexing you have to read it again and again
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Sept 20, 2004 2:06:01 GMT -5
the title made me laugh, but like kris, i'm unsure what the topic was. maybe it was a SOC piece? .rk
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Post by T.J. Barber on Sept 22, 2004 11:13:29 GMT -5
I agree with the girls...I couldn't grasp the true meaning behind the words but the words themselves flowed incredibely. Great job my friend and welcome back...
Tj
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