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bloodredtears
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I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk.

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Could Have Jan 8, 2004 9:03:41 GMT -5

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Post by bloodredtears on Jan 8, 2004 9:03:41 GMT -5

Could Have
12/31/03

how the hell
do you call yourself a friend?
how can you even
look at yourself?
no matter what happened
I gave you a change to explain.
I forgave you time after time
but you turned away.
This time you didn't
bother with exuses,
you didn't bother calling,
didn't care enough.
You bastard!
I couldn't believe that
once again i was disappointed.
But i don't know why
I'm so f**king surprised.
This time I swear;
I swear upon my broken heart
that I'll never let you back in.
I'm exorcising you...
and you probably won't even realize
what you could have had

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SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Could Have Jan 14, 2004 20:53:17 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Jan 14, 2004 20:53:17 GMT -5 The fury of this piece is almost palpable. Very nice.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Could Have Jan 16, 2004 12:24:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Jan 16, 2004 12:24:36 GMT -5 thanks...it's for one of my "friends" who has repeatedly made promises and broken them..yet still has the audacity to expect me to forgive each and every time...
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

serenepoetress Apprentice Posts: 84	Could Have Jan 28, 2004 15:49:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by serenepoetress on Jan 28, 2004 15:49:54 GMT -5 Some never value what they have until it is gone...one day when they review their life's path they will realize how much their own choices truly cost them...this is an exceptional piece...
	Copyright 2004 Laura Mae Oldham-Brownell

T.J. Barber Administrator Founder I would advise you to stay on my good side!!! Posts: 937	Could Have Feb 3, 2004 11:34:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 3, 2004 11:34:15 GMT -5 Remind me never to make you mad. (LOL) I truly enjoyed this piece. It was incredibely painful and harsh. I like that. I try not to be that way but I can be sometimes. Great Piece, Kris
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bloodredtears
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I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk.

Posts: 1,164

Could Have Feb 3, 2004 13:59:03 GMT -5

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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 3, 2004 13:59:03 GMT -5

thanks again everyone! i really appreciate the feedback...and yes, when i'm riled you want to avoid me at all costs...not because i'm physically violent, but because i have an icy chill that can hurt those that i dont' intend to hurt

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**Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Could Have Feb 15, 2004 20:36:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 20:36:33 GMT -5 once again...awesome job! i really like poems written like this where there is no rhyme scheme, no specific rhythm...its just you letting your feelings out and it comes out so well. nice job!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	Could Have Feb 16, 2004 13:50:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Feb 16, 2004 13:50:27 GMT -5 that was crazy-filled emotion, i loved it, excellent write
	Amber

Post by bloodredtears on Jan 8, 2004 9:03:41 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Jan 14, 2004 20:53:17 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Jan 16, 2004 12:24:36 GMT -5

Post by serenepoetress on Jan 28, 2004 15:49:54 GMT -5

Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 3, 2004 11:34:15 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 3, 2004 13:59:03 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 20:36:33 GMT -5

Post by amberputis on Feb 16, 2004 13:50:27 GMT -5