Echo

[alostandbrokensoul]

Your voice is an echo
to every word I say
I just wish you would let go
and leave me here to stay.
Your voice is my conscience
to every thought I think
it doesnt make any sense
that I just let my heart sink.
Your voice is my nightmare
to everytime I sleep
thought I hate it, your always there
that I just have to weep.
Your voice is my life
to everyday I live
you have caused me so much strife
peace I wish you'd give.
Your voice is gone
no longer my life
I once loved you
till you caused me so much strife.
I hear no echo
no ones thoughts but mine
I sleep peacfully
and live my own life.

[Seth]

Interesting write, I enjoy the message and the emotion in this piece. The title also fits it perfectly...

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

you used the repetition perfectly.
x r x

[Mikepoet]

That blew me away..You opened a new avenue of thought to me in that someone could be so much and exist so fully in anothers life..