The Murderer

[Horn]

The Murderer
Deep inside,
It only takes time
Until the murderer within
Penetrates the goodness
Only time until
The world breaks me down
And I self-destruct
Taking them with me
Yet t moral to do it myself now,
Only time unti the one who hates all
Takes the shortcut of selfishness and hate,
Taking matters into my own hands

[Seth]

Only time until the one who hates all
Takes the shortcut of selfishness and hate,
Taking matters into my own hands

I like these lines the best. Nicely written- I love the concept and the way you've worded this piece.
I also love the title of this write of yours.

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

a sweep of the spellcheck and proofread will make this write fantastic!
x r x

[Horn]

oh woops, thanks lol