Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Jun 21, 2004 9:54:24 GMT -5
Inadequate
Sick with sin of suffering And unworthy acknowledgments. You take her for more than she is Though she’s better than what you thought. She won’t bear the cross she created. Impotency cracks her strength.
Her indignity rarefied To become more than She should actually be valued. [As if she ever was anyway...] Idiocies rendered in sweet dark; The shadows hide the truth.
In a time where nightmares Become her fantasies, And insomnia’s hours Are spent keeping sanity Just out of reach, She threads uncertainty In her words and between The twists of her sheets.
She could let you look inside, But she’d kill you with her eyes.
...random inspiration from a song actually...yeah. my ramblings do go without purpose...I'm not sure what exactly I was trying to convey here...but oh well.
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Post by Mikepoet on Jun 21, 2004 12:09:30 GMT -5
Good write..what I gathered was a jealous one who disliked this other female..Perhaps even a Sister warning Brother..either way a good write..
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Post by desecration on Jul 8, 2004 2:44:40 GMT -5
i dont know whether i like seeing myself and several other people i know in that or not...lol. but either way it was awesome!
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jul 22, 2004 22:47:24 GMT -5
ah, eclipse, i am a fan. x r x
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