NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on May 25, 2004 0:49:40 GMT -5
Do you ever feel the little tear sitting at the top of time pushing at your eye when little fears seem oh so big dreaming seem to fade a little poke from long past thoughts pains that once caressed your heart surface but for a second when all is right time seems to stop just to remind you even the strong can tremble doubts and clouds off on the sunset and the sun pokes through
(this is meant to be just a nudge to inspire, I would enjoy hearing if it fits what I had in mind as others see it?)
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Post by angel on Jun 2, 2004 21:41:38 GMT -5
it seems inspirational...but I dont know what about...yet again i need a translation. I love the beginning. and i love how you put the word "poke" in there...its such a funny word that isnt used much....poke poke poke...ok I am easily amused....
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