An Eternity

[alostandbrokensoul]

Darkness engulfs the soul

ripping it limb from limb

you cry your pain

but it never ceases

the torment rages on as the darkness spreads

light disappears into the air

and there is nothing but silence

the antagonizing pain ripping, tearing, engulfing you

you hear the voices of everyone

those you love, those you tease, those you hate

their pain is your and life is at its end

all wrong you have done becomes a nightmare

and adds to the pain clawing at you with sharp talons

like those of a bird catching its prey and taking its troubles away

Yours still exist and there is no end

You call out into the darkness and pain

and see a hand reach for you, it is your savior

Until it disperses into the air snatched away by the darkness before you could reach it

An eternity rages on with pain, waves of pain like a storm coming in with the tide

An eternity of torment for your pain and it finally ceases.

[angel]

It is so amazing to see how different everyone writes. Nobody writes the same. You have a very unique writing style for this poem. Nicely done