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Post by cherry on May 22, 2004 19:07:55 GMT -5
one of my poems not my best Too many secrets go untold Too many shattered hearts no one knows Too many things to regret A dance I can't forget Too many scars never seen Too many cuts too deep to heel Why did I do this Why do I care The truth lays in a secret I dare not share A secret hidden in the past A fight thats always lost and ends in death
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Post by bloodredtears on May 23, 2004 14:05:49 GMT -5
this is a good piece...i love the last two lines especially...keep up the good work!
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Post by alostandbrokensoul on May 23, 2004 14:28:21 GMT -5
i thought this was a wonderful poem!
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