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Post by sterling06 on May 17, 2004 23:19:00 GMT -5
Frustration running through my veins with intense emotions. I keep the pain in me as my mind pounds, the sweat trickling down my face as i perspire unrelentlessly. This feeling only bringing on more rage a feeling of anger no one understands. People i thought i could trust, only their to betray me. It's not a friend but someone from my own family. Words tremble out of him without his mind in motion. The only thing that is comforting me now is the flowing words of music that i can relate to. The sweet sound of someone singing my pains away. The feeling i get after listening brings light and releases the anger. The feeling is bearable, unresentful, pleasent, no one is near to bother my emotions. no one is near to frustrate my soul. I'm beginning to feel weary and yet remain whole.
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Post by bloodredtears on May 17, 2004 23:46:28 GMT -5
music is such a wonderful means of escape! yay...this is a great piece...the last two lines are my favorite...they really grabbed me..great job!
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Post by shebangs17 on May 18, 2004 18:48:09 GMT -5
i liked your poem, very emotional and strong. good work!
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