No Where to hide

[NeverMore]

locked in the wide smile
no place to hide away
life feels like all is right
there is no where to hide from it
I look and I search
for somewhere to hide away
from a place I used to fear
I look for a small corner
so I can look out and see
just what is happening
in this life of mine
yet I see so clear
there is only one place for me
for sitting in that corner
right against the wall
is the only place I feel safe
the only time I feel right
where in that corner
is where you await me
you scare me so deep
you comfort me so strong
within the fears you hold
I see futures I never dreamed
I look for a place to hide
your arms are my safe place
my doorway to being complete

[bloodredtears]

another wonderful piece Joe...I love the last two lines of this piece

your arms are my safe place
my doorway to being complete

i can't wait to find something like that...if it exists...great work!

[Chaotic_Thetis]

The utter lack of punctuation that makes this one long enjambamant seems to illustrate a certain whitsfulness, like a long thought process and dream as i were. Nice write.

[NeverMore]

two rules of writing will never apply to what I write *L* .. punctuation and grammer. When I use either, it is always in ways that would make an English teacher cringe. I have a firm belief that standard rules of writing put limits on what a person can portray. Add to that I will say I can't spell worth a hill of beans either. Rules, they mean very little to me.

*chuckles* aside from that, I am glad this one was enjoyed. It came from a special day .. thanks all ...cheers