Horn
Novice
Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us
Posts: 66
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Hope
May 12, 2004 20:39:18 GMT -5
Post by Horn on May 12, 2004 20:39:18 GMT -5
Hope I have this small fire in my heart, But it is being smothered, By everyone, even me, I am never going to make it… Yet the unknown future, the twinkle Of the light keeps me going… That hope for a better tomorrow… The hope I overcome my mass of failures Right now, I have done nothing… They say if you are not social, Well, you must be studious… Accomplishments? Hah! What have I done? Anything to satisfy you? Do I live to satisfy you? This huge boulder of expectations That I must carry is weighing me down, I am tripping, I am falling down to the ground... Well f*ck you, f*ck me I guess I can’t do anything right, But there is still hope… So young, so much time left, So much time for change, Always hoping to have This myth we call happiness… Why do I take this? Only for the hope, for my family, for the future, No one else, nothing more, To everyone else I am just another Worthless nobody… Without me, the world be no different… I would be happier taken away, completely away, But, perhaps, maybe, in the corner of my mind, Maybe that all this change, I don’t know... Hell, what did I ever know?
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NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
Posts: 454
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Hope
May 12, 2004 23:09:38 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on May 12, 2004 23:09:38 GMT -5
First.. I really like the way you got your feelings accross in this one, great job. Second,
when the darkest of times hit the lights are all but gone when the cold sets in your heart feels like ice the tiniest little spark will sit in a corner give it a little fuel you will start a firestorm of hope
I have been there a time or two, where I thought all hope was gone. I can even say I was ready to give up completely. I think I even did give up at one point and something brought me back. Give that spark a chance and run with it.. you will be glad you did ...
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Hope
May 13, 2004 10:19:17 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on May 13, 2004 10:19:17 GMT -5
i love this piece horn....another great example of how talented you are...great job!
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
Posts: 330
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Hope
May 14, 2004 16:08:48 GMT -5
Post by amberputis on May 14, 2004 16:08:48 GMT -5
awesome job, this was a killer piece!
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
Posts: 222
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Hope
May 16, 2004 17:51:05 GMT -5
Post by Eclipse on May 16, 2004 17:51:05 GMT -5
wow i really liked this one. it was almost like you're battling with your thoughts in a poetic sense. very nice.
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