Hunter
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Fallen Angel
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Dawn
May 7, 2004 20:14:54 GMT -5
Post by Hunter on May 7, 2004 20:14:54 GMT -5
Dawn
I wonder often
if the hunting bird
saw the hunter
raise his rifle
or was she dazzled
by the beauty
of an Autumn dawn
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amberputis
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~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Dawn
May 7, 2004 21:34:13 GMT -5
Post by amberputis on May 7, 2004 21:34:13 GMT -5
hmm..wonders, incredible things huh? hehe, nice job...curiosity is a great subject to be put into poems, so many unanswered questions..yet again, nice
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Hunter
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Dawn
May 7, 2004 23:34:54 GMT -5
Post by Hunter on May 7, 2004 23:34:54 GMT -5
Thank you.
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