NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
Posts: 454
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Post by NeverMore on May 7, 2004 3:07:49 GMT -5
Take me as i am,
for this is who resides within.
I am a simple soul
that loves and wants.
One who needs and dreams.
With all the thoughts
and hopes of many.
I keep to being gentle,
not wish harm.
i am the man I want to see,
in that mirror every morning.
There is no perfection,
not behind these eyes.
I offer nothing.
but the flawed person I am
and the love that I have for you.
I ask nothing in return,
but the chance
to love you as I do
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As I am
May 12, 2004 17:29:02 GMT -5
Post by John Barnett on May 12, 2004 17:29:02 GMT -5
This is nice Joe, I like the meaning
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Chaotic_Thetis
Apprentice
Bleed me! For i have witnessed yet remained silent.Slay me! For i had your love and kept it.
Posts: 142
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As I am
May 16, 2004 9:15:59 GMT -5
Post by Chaotic_Thetis on May 16, 2004 9:15:59 GMT -5
Seemed to have a cliche beginning but it had a soft and serene meaning to it, which certainly added to a better uderstanding. A bit more imagery wouldn't kill you though, to really rip it open and get straight to it.
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NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
Posts: 454
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As I am
May 23, 2004 21:28:29 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on May 23, 2004 21:28:29 GMT -5
I thank you, even a one word comment says a lot *S* ..
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