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Post by KG on May 6, 2004 16:57:48 GMT -5
Down for dirt, and you aint playin with a full deck Cause you aint seen another brother make it yet No respect for society, society lies you want the blind leading the blind? so you are hearing sirens, street hustler, men are fools cause they lust her, them busters they lose if they trust you, another deal to the real, makin mad money now you know how the players feel, spark up a topic, drinkin 40 with your boys, tell a few lies to pass the time, like TNT up in smoke, death comes quick to the hustler that chokes, aint no comin back from the chamber of fire, deaths always knockin at the door of the liar, evil desires mad like fires, spill the blood of your brothers to lift yourself higher, clownvict, condict, you gettin played by them hustlers and they sealed it with a kiss, can't kill the fable when the able got down, judgment day comes went aint no body around, from a city of hatred you will pay for your actions, check the tombstone and read the small caption, To many young bloods slippin under ground, like ducks on a rope those hustlers got you spellbound, hellbound yeah, you makin money but you can't make sense, keep messin around and you be past tense
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Post by KG on May 6, 2004 16:58:07 GMT -5
I saw the other Rap that was posted so I had to get in on it to!
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Post by bloodredtears on May 6, 2004 17:12:05 GMT -5
good rap KG...the reason i didn't post my rap in song and lyrics is cuz i don't consider rap music...and the only reason i wrote it was a challenge....yours is good...
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Post by John Barnett on May 6, 2004 18:10:05 GMT -5
My poem "This Thing" is kind of a rap song/poem fused into one...and I posted it here also...great job Brad, I like this a lot, I can sense the flow of it, so that means it's a good rap
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Post by KG on May 7, 2004 21:47:44 GMT -5
thanks but I just realized this isn't the whole thing I must have been slackin lol, I'll post it later when I am not so lazy! ;D
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Post by Burning Innocence on May 8, 2004 6:39:24 GMT -5
Hey this is great!! ;D It's been a long time since I've actually heard you rap, but I'll take reading one for now. I love how it flows and everything. Where's the rest eh?!
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Post by Hunter on May 15, 2004 9:23:13 GMT -5
Good.
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