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Post by John Barnett on May 5, 2004 17:10:25 GMT -5
The essence of this thing It's better than a dream So silky like a cream It makes me wanna scream
It hits me like a sting It makes me wanna sing I am empowered like a king Oh to feel the ting
This thing can soothe Make me feel smooth Make me hot when I'm cool And make me look like a fool
I dream up fantasies of you My mind is engulfed by the residue Of the infusions of the illusions That are confusing my brain Oh sometimes I can feel the pain
Slide into a hole Try and break the mold Try to be too bold And you'll be left in the cold
You entrance my mind Like no other kind Sweet woman of mine Gotta have you all the time
You make me feel good Make me feel understood Or confused as ever You're so clever
This thing has got a hold on me But I can't get out, I am hungry You make it better, you make it worse Is this thing love or is it a curse?
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Post by bloodredtears on May 5, 2004 17:49:01 GMT -5
very interesting piece here john...i like it...good job!
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Post by John Barnett on May 7, 2004 9:50:41 GMT -5
Thanks Kris
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Post by amberputis on May 7, 2004 21:36:56 GMT -5
i too thought it was interesting...good job
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on May 12, 2004 18:17:13 GMT -5
Interesting yes...great yes...keep it up John! But exactly what is this "thing"?
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