NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
Posts: 454
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Reason
Apr 28, 2004 8:47:34 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Apr 28, 2004 8:47:34 GMT -5
Life brings reason
purpose with dreams
faith in your being
gives reason to live long
as the flowers grow by the door
the sun shines every day
rain falls from the sky
moonlight lights the way
time passes faster as it goes
life swaggers carefully along
we grow with what we learn
we live with how we learn
events keep coming
worlds fall into place
loves come to be
making life complete
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Reason
Apr 28, 2004 20:25:16 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 28, 2004 20:25:16 GMT -5
we grow with what we learn
we live with how we learn
excellent!
x rinna x
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Reason
Apr 30, 2004 9:49:11 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on Apr 30, 2004 9:49:11 GMT -5
Well rhymed and deep.
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Mac
Novice
Posts: 9
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Reason
May 1, 2004 10:40:02 GMT -5
Post by Mac on May 1, 2004 10:40:02 GMT -5
enjoyed the read, a well crafted and thought out piece.
Mac
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Hunter
Virtuoso
Fallen Angel
Posts: 287
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Reason
May 2, 2004 2:47:08 GMT -5
Post by Hunter on May 2, 2004 2:47:08 GMT -5
Very good.
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