Horn
Novice
Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us
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Post by Horn on Apr 27, 2004 12:22:28 GMT -5
This is more like a paragraph than the poem, but oh wells. Happiness Happiness is a myth, A dream that was made From figments of the imagination
Happiness never lasts, Is only temporary, and When you are in that state, You always crave more and more.
There are always problems, struggles, Answers that are not always so simple.
Some say the bliss that we all seek Is taken in the form of ignorance. Maybe we all should all be Ignorant of the world around us?
Happiness may lay in the lives of others, Knowing they can continue the Quest to find what everyone seeks.
Happiness is one of mystery, of the unknown. Think for one moment. Are you truly happy, or are they just telling You how to become it? Only you can discover the true answer…
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 27, 2004 16:23:57 GMT -5
All of your poetry has such depth. I have enjoyed each of them all the more. This one speaks to me deeply. Very well written. It really related to a lot that I have dealt with....
Great job, TJ
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 28, 2004 0:17:47 GMT -5
another lovely piece...i like the format it is set up in...how it does seem like a paragraph...those are some of the easiest to follow...great job!
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Hunter
Virtuoso
Fallen Angel
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Post by Hunter on Apr 30, 2004 4:25:28 GMT -5
Excellent.
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Mac
Novice
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Post by Mac on Apr 30, 2004 17:19:45 GMT -5
we look for the answer and it stares back from a bathroom mirror. well done
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