NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 27, 2004 3:52:29 GMT -5
Know me now
who i am today
in the summer of my life
as the sun shines
see the path I walk
holding this gentle hand
through sunrise and sunset
in rain and in heat
see who I am today
a heart so full
with a love so true
walking with each stride
see this love I hold
that makes my life complete
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 27, 2004 16:22:09 GMT -5
Very well written Joe. I enjoyed it's short nature. It had depth to be so small. Very nice job!
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 28, 2004 0:16:07 GMT -5
i love this piece, especially this part...i like how it reminds me to stop looking deeper into people for an ulterior motive, to try and take it as it is...take them as they are....who they are today...great job!
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Hunter
Virtuoso
Fallen Angel
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Post by Hunter on Apr 30, 2004 4:23:13 GMT -5
Good, good.
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