I don't do

Tania
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I don't do Apr 26, 2004 23:26:25 GMT -5

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Post by Tania on Apr 26, 2004 23:26:25 GMT -5

I don’t do petty
I don’t do lies
I don’t do knifing
Someone who is innocent
To survive
I don’t do b*tchy
I don’t do spite
You may think
You have the right
I don’t want to be
Part of the
Critique
Whom that like to politic
With two faced lies
The group that cries
and
Moans
Invariablely ends
Alone.
Tana

T.J. Barber Administrator Founder I would advise you to stay on my good side!!! Posts: 937	I don't do Apr 26, 2004 23:51:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 26, 2004 23:51:15 GMT -5 Hey, this one was very good. I enjoyed this piece very much. It's raw and attitude made it irresistable to the eyes. Great job, Tj
	No man is an island in itself...Therefore, never send for whom the bell tolls. It tolls for the''

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	I don't do Apr 28, 2004 0:09:52 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Apr 28, 2004 0:09:52 GMT -5 i really loved the first for lines...this poem had an intersting shape and even more interesting subject matter...good job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

Hunter Virtuoso Fallen Angel Posts: 287	I don't do Apr 29, 2004 4:56:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hunter on Apr 29, 2004 4:56:11 GMT -5 Good.
	Beneath this mask of sparkling words, I am nothing. So forgive me for raising your hopes.

Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	I don't do Apr 29, 2004 20:31:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Apr 29, 2004 20:31:25 GMT -5 a unique form and flowing rhyme. i enjoyed it. ^.^
	You saw what you get If you take what you take. Look in the eyes of the test. It's all because... Now there's a feeling I get. When I look to the left. But we can never be sensed. Our searching for a sign.

Post by Tania on Apr 26, 2004 23:26:25 GMT -5

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