Eclipse
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It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Apr 24, 2004 10:51:34 GMT -5
A Dove in The Darkness
There’s something burning on my lips. And I think it tastes like hope. There’s something shining in my eyes. And I think that it’s the sun. Finally come out to bloom and cast away All those dark and dreary shadows Where my heart was in profile to The darkness, a clear shot in the scope of a gun, held by the hands of my Insecurities.
There’s something fluttering past me In soft beats and ruffled feathers . There’s some beautiful song in my ears And it’s piercing anything that I ever thought was beautiful. I think it could be a siren’s song, But I’m not drowning with choking Cold water washing down my throat And I don’t feel the cold of the ice Frozen upon my heart Anymore.
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NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 24, 2004 13:49:00 GMT -5
very nicely written.. I enjoyed it
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Apr 25, 2004 9:14:53 GMT -5
thanks! yeah it's not really written in my usual style...but it was kind of a random inspiration and i went with it. thanks again for the reply. ^.^
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Hunter
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Fallen Angel
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Post by Hunter on Apr 27, 2004 18:12:48 GMT -5
Nicely done.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 28, 2004 20:31:32 GMT -5
i like it x rinna x
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