Connect the dots

[NeverMore]

I looked out my window today,
Just to see what I could see.
There I saw a dream float bye,
On a golden purple sea.

I left my shack to go to shore,
To find what this marvel was.
As I traveled down the path
I saw a site not understood.

People were laughing,
People we crying
Yet and every one of them,
Was walking all alone.

At every bend and every turn
A wonder to behold.
emotions flowing everywhere,
Stories to be told.

I reached the shore
Stunned at what I saw.
Desks and desks
All in perfect rows.


Atop each and every desk,
Were small machines.
With windows open there,
to every corner of the globe.

People loving people,
from everywhere there is.

This poem, as all things in life have several different endings. We all must write our own.

[bloodredtears]

i like this alot...i'm not sure what you intended for meaning, but what i got out of it was the loneliness of people...and then the desks in the rows...is that computers are going to me more common than true human contact now...amazing...

[NeverMore]

The meaning of this is just what you would like it to be, which is why the ending is left to the individual. How a person ends this, gives it's full meaning to them alone *S* Glad you enjoyed it.