Self-destruction

Tania
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Self-destruction Apr 17, 2004 3:08:24 GMT -5

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Post by Tania on Apr 17, 2004 3:08:24 GMT -5

Travesty of self-destruction
Is one of lonely despaire
Due to lack of non-emotion
Or due to "I don't care"
Hearts are shattered -blood is spilled
Emotion frozen, love killed
Tears of indifference end in lost
silence and muted pain
In the pather of another lost friendship
where self-hatred has lain
Party-time in mass hysteria
where base emotion lies
Nightmare loss of sould destroyed
Softly cries - reality dies
Tania

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Self-destruction Apr 17, 2004 15:19:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 15:19:22 GMT -5 wow...wonderfully written...for a minute i swore you were writing about my life....great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

Tania Novice Posts: 49	Self-destruction Apr 17, 2004 20:21:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tania on Apr 17, 2004 20:21:34 GMT -5 Thank you very much yet again for your wonderful comments on my poem. Tania

Hunter Virtuoso Fallen Angel Posts: 287	Self-destruction Apr 21, 2004 7:14:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hunter on Apr 21, 2004 7:14:33 GMT -5 Very good.
	Beneath this mask of sparkling words, I am nothing. So forgive me for raising your hopes.

Post by Tania on Apr 17, 2004 3:08:24 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 15:19:22 GMT -5

Post by Tania on Apr 17, 2004 20:21:34 GMT -5

Post by Hunter on Apr 21, 2004 7:14:33 GMT -5