NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Apr 16, 2004 16:15:19 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Apr 16, 2004 16:15:19 GMT -5
what is this nipping at my soul this late December night sitting here alone someone is knowing or is it my mind is that faint sound just a wishful thought or is something tapping have I been so low that the wind calls I wish I understood what happened here the dream remains the pain so real of lost and forgotten but something aches saying let me in who are you there knocking so lightly do you truly want in or is it the wind
(I would place a poem like this and so many others I write, in a place called searching if there was such a class. At some point, we all are searching, at times, we suffer the search far to long in life)
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Apr 17, 2004 15:08:49 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 15:08:49 GMT -5
wonderful piece..and its true that we're all searching...it sucks that its so hard to find what we're looking for...great job!
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Hunter
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Fallen Angel
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Apr 20, 2004 1:07:35 GMT -5
Post by Hunter on Apr 20, 2004 1:07:35 GMT -5
Well written.
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