Jailbait

[::..::FoX::..::]

She was such a pretty girl
She sent my heart in a whirl
I was smitten from the start
Now she wants to tear me apart

One night,
In the moonlight
We made love
Beneath the stars above
I was eighteen
She was too
So I thought
But I was a fool
She was only sixteen

Her daddy hated my guys
Now he wants to cut off my nuts
But he'll settle for me doing time
But oh no! I won't go down for this
I only cared for that little miss
She stabbed me in the back
When we got out of the sack
Now I'm a criminal
Her lies are literal
But I won't go down
Not without a fight
I'm gonna give them all my might

[NeverMore]

oh my! *S* now what can a person say about this one.. for content it was very well written, for experience behind it, ouch! Stand your ground, the truth always comes out eventually.

[bloodredtears]

damn...good writing, bad situation...did everything work out or is it still happening? this is a true story i'm guessing...tough stuff...great piece!

[John Barnett]

I remember this one Fox, it has a hint of humor as well as a story of drama, well done.

[Mikepoet]

Damn I hope you are not raely going through this. I see or saw rather back when I was younger quite a few fellas have to get into trouble from underage girls who lied about their age and had sex with an older fella.
How in the world could a hot blooded male get into trouble for this? Man I hope you get out of this one.

[::..::FoX::..::]

Woah, I'm not in this situation. The poem is losely based on a true story about me and an ex, but she never pressed charges or anything, her dad was the only one who ever found out, the parts about the law was just added to make the drama better...the poem is meant to be slightly humorous while at the same time serious.

[Mikepoet]

;DGlad here.

[X x K e l Z x X]

That's humorous