Vanity

[NeverMore]

I looked in the mirror this day
saw someone looking back
he told me some interesting things
he told me what he thought was they way
He said
My dreams and desires are all that matter
My tomorrows and my happiness
What I want to do
where I want to go
What I want to learn
Who I want to know
All I could hear was the I and the Me
I looked in the mirror
at this man looking back
I said
Then I am glad I am not you
For what I want is true
For once I was you
I wanted for me, and now I see
to be truly happy
is just to give me away

[angel]

i'm confused again...dont take offense to it...But for some reason this poem calls to me...its like it has a very deep meaning I yet have to find. There are some spelling mistakes...but over all, it is very original, and originality is awesome. nice perspective

[NeverMore]

Don't let my spelling confuse you *S* .. I think I said somewhere, I can not spell worth a hill of beans... but this poem... just me telling me things I think *S* Glad you enjoyed the idea of that

[bloodredtears]

wonderful...what i got out of this poem, is that to give of yourself makes you happier than to receive things for yourself...wonderful piece!

[NeverMore]

*smiles* is not giving, what makes it all worth it? Thanks.. the compliments are greatly appreciated

[Hunter]

Very good.