Memories

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Memories Apr 1, 2004 21:50:54 GMT -5

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Post by CappuccinoSkittlez on Apr 1, 2004 21:50:54 GMT -5

Forgotten on a worn mahogany shelf
Lies an aged picture frame.
The faded picture inside
Is all that remains.

She’s just a dusty memory
Of long times past,
Back when life seemed simple
And hopes did last.

Euphoric dreams
Filled up her head;
Perfect alternate reality
Before she was dead.

What happened to her?
Why did she die?
This innocent girl
Was corrupted by lies.

As time passes on
The world has no lament, yet
A young girl's story stays;
captured in one quiescent moment.

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Memories Apr 2, 2004 0:30:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Apr 2, 2004 0:30:37 GMT -5 i really enjoyed this piece...it could quite easily fit into the depression category i think...anyway...wonderfully written...the first stanza was my favorite...a big welcome to poet club...hope to read more from you!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	Memories Apr 2, 2004 17:14:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Apr 2, 2004 17:14:22 GMT -5 impressive piece. welcome!
	You saw what you get If you take what you take. Look in the eyes of the test. It's all because... Now there's a feeling I get. When I look to the left. But we can never be sensed. Our searching for a sign.

Mikepoet Virtuoso Posts: 487	Memories Apr 13, 2004 21:30:04 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mikepoet on Apr 13, 2004 21:30:04 GMT -5 Quite well read. I must read your writings.

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Memories Apr 14, 2004 15:16:22 GMT -5

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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 14, 2004 15:16:22 GMT -5

Yes, welcome to Poet Club. We thrive on the happiness of our members. Therefore, if you need anything, do not hesitate to ask anyone of the staff. The Prince of Muse,Fox, and myself will be more than willing to help you. Thanks for joining. By the way, this poem is really good. It shows true potential. Very good indeed.

No man is an island in itself...Therefore, never send for whom the bell tolls. It tolls for the''

Hunter Virtuoso Fallen Angel Posts: 287	Memories Apr 19, 2004 19:51:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hunter on Apr 19, 2004 19:51:47 GMT -5 Well done.
	Beneath this mask of sparkling words, I am nothing. So forgive me for raising your hopes.

Post by CappuccinoSkittlez on Apr 1, 2004 21:50:54 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Apr 2, 2004 0:30:37 GMT -5

Post by Eclipse on Apr 2, 2004 17:14:22 GMT -5

Post by Mikepoet on Apr 13, 2004 21:30:04 GMT -5

Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 14, 2004 15:16:22 GMT -5

Post by Hunter on Apr 19, 2004 19:51:47 GMT -5