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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 1, 2004 13:52:07 GMT -5
Illusions all around me,
As I search for whats real.
Confusions confound me,
Pseudo dreams, pseudo feels.
Contusions seek refuge,
From a world that hurts your heart.
Bemused are my efforts,
Transient idioms of bi polar thought.
1st breath is life.
Last breath you die.
No heaven or hell,
Reincarnate will I.
Reincarnation: Evolution of the essence of a soul.
There I am in the dead of night,
Cloaked in the shadows of illusive light.
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 2, 2004 0:29:07 GMT -5
sweet poem...i really really liked this one...i think its my favorite of yours...great job!
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 2, 2004 5:45:55 GMT -5
Thank you..You are nice to talk to.. ;DI posted this at AC and then thought it was not up tp srandards and pulled it.
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unwritten
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well behaved women rarly make history
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Post by unwritten on Apr 7, 2004 20:55:36 GMT -5
interesting... "Reincarnation: Evolution of the essence of a soul." i liked it.
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 7, 2004 21:25:24 GMT -5
A poem will come one day for this subject, I already have written several poems that are like one stanza I like and the rest dribble. I bet alot of us do that. What I need to do is start a folder specificaly for one liners. Huh..think I am going to do that.. Thanks for the reply. ;D
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 13, 2004 17:53:57 GMT -5
Very well written. It had nice structure and it layed out the story very well. Good job Mike..
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 13, 2004 18:56:08 GMT -5
Mike, I really enjoyed this. I love psychological stuff and this is great, very well written.
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 13, 2004 21:25:16 GMT -5
Thanks a bunch. I realy do not know much about Psych. besides odd pieces I pick up from TV shows, or mags. perhaps. It rhymed though, thats important.  Dead man, this is two seperate poems that seemed to fit under the concept of Idioms of Bi-polar disorder. |
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