Forest of life.

[Mikepoet]

Serene are the trees in the forest of life.
No warfare, no horror, no torture, no strife.
They bask in the sun learning all they perceive.
With their own ideas on eternity.
Had no eyes, no ears, no senses at all.
They knew of the mood. Their favorite was fall.

One morning they felt a creature pass,
In the shadows of dawn,
He cut down a tree, a new sense was born.
That sense was fear but still they watched.

[bloodredtears]

that's pretty cool...i wouldn't have ended it there, to me it seems almost incomplete....but i do like this!

[Mikepoet]

Thank you and you are right it is part of a story that takes place on an atom. If one could stand on the surface of a nutron it may be simular to the Earth. I could post a bit more of the story if you like.

[Eclipse]

intriuging. i liked it. ^.^

[Mikepoet]

Thank you and I will post a another sort of poem in the story.