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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 24, 2004 13:14:40 GMT -5
So many times I get called a slut By those very men who stare at my butt They stare wide-eyed at my chest They tell me I'm good and say I'm the best But they are only thinking with their bottom head All they want to do is get me in bed
I may be a bad girl, but I can be sweet Candy and roses still knock me off my feet I can be dumb, but I'm usually very smart I have a deep soul and plenty of heart I've won the game and I've took the cake But I've also failed and made my share of mistakes When I fall down and wear a sad frown But then I take that frown and turn it upside down
I've been in love with someone before And my heart's been broken and dropped on the floor I may be a girl but I'm still a strong fighter I can't light the whole world with just my lighter But I can make someone's day just a little bit brighter
Some people hate me while others really love me Why I'm the way I am is totally above me But all I can do in life is just be myself everyday And that's what I'll do, that's the only way
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Post by bloodredtears on Mar 24, 2004 17:38:35 GMT -5
wonderful piece...i can especially relate to the first stanza...i mistakingly bought a webcam, so i could chat with my aunt and a couple of friends that are a faraway and actually see them and they can see how i'm doing and stuff....well...when men know you have a cam..lets just say you get a lot of jerks....but anyway being as that's not the only message in this wonderful piece...i'd like to say...great job! can't wait to read some more of your stuff and it's very nice to see you again!
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Post by John Barnett on Mar 25, 2004 13:53:36 GMT -5
I agree with Kris, this is one of your best Kelly, it describes you well, and I too am so glad to see you here at Poet Club again, posting. Kelly was another one of our original members, although she didn't get to be a major part of it, she was an admin at Coffee House, so she's played an important role here to us. Great to have you back around Kel.
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Chaotic_Thetis
Apprentice
Bleed me! For i have witnessed yet remained silent.Slay me! For i had your love and kept it.
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Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Mar 27, 2004 4:49:07 GMT -5
Indeed, i've read this before on the previous site and still i find it rather powerful. Very hard hitting and nicely laid out with a perfect ending.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 27, 2004 13:11:43 GMT -5
Thank you all so much!
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 4, 2004 23:03:17 GMT -5
A thread was run at another site that questioned why a permiscuas [bad speller] woman is a slut, whereas a man is a stud..I wonder myself.
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