unwritten
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well behaved women rarly make history
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Post by unwritten on Mar 22, 2004 19:25:56 GMT -5
I fight in times of forgiveness I defend myself when I'm wrong I cry in bouts of sadness When there's nothing really wrong
I never focus when I need too My attention spans been lost I'm never truly honest And I continually pay the cost
I push buttons when I shouldn't Pushing people to the edge I never completely change I'm always caught just on the ledge
I never think quite past myself Selfishness still reigns And I'm never truly satisfied Even when its all okay
My forgiveness won't come easy Toward me or anyone else Though I still must believe That its alright to be myself
I'm secure in my imperfections Confident in my flaws For I am only human And perfection isn't law
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Post by T.J. Barber on Mar 22, 2004 19:34:42 GMT -5
I enjoyed this piece very much. Great job writing this one.
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Mar 22, 2004 19:59:17 GMT -5
i looooved this piece. it sounds like something i would have written. awesome write.
And I'm never truly satisfied Even when its all okay
i can completely relate to those lines. actually, i can relate to just about the entire poem. lovely job. well done. ^.^
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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Mar 23, 2004 1:43:36 GMT -5
this is very interesting because you wrote of your flaws, same flaws that everyone has so openly. I'm very astounded that you can be so unashamed about your faults and quirks because I must admit, I feel bad sometimes about some of my imperfections but still, as you said, we're only human...
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 20:23:53 GMT -5
This was so great, I love reading poems like this, excellent job unwritten!
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 7, 2004 16:09:00 GMT -5
This was very nicely written...well done.
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 16, 2004 16:48:51 GMT -5
This was a good read. deep self reflection. If your not moveing forwards your backing up.
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NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 17, 2004 2:05:10 GMT -5
This is excellent!! helps me.. if not most of us, see that we are not alone with imperfections..
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