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Alex'z Death Chic
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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Feb 24, 2004 21:26:54 GMT -5

Looking out from my window

I see the sky so infinitely high

The melody of the rain in my ears

Your soft touch caressing my cheeks

Your sweet embrace keeping me warm

My hand in yours fit perfectly right

Your lips on mine casting a spell on me

A spell I thought that could never break

But now I’m just dreaming of you at night

Somewhere where the sky is bluer than blue

Where the grass is greener under the pouring rain

A silent sanctuary for me and you

All I can do now is look out the window

And see the sky still infinitely high

The melody of the rain still in my ears

The only difference is you’re not here…

I'm a bad girl only when bad boys want me bad

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Gone Feb 24, 2004 21:30:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 24, 2004 21:30:25 GMT -5 another wonderful poem...i really am enjoying ur poetry...keep up the good work!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Gone Feb 24, 2004 21:41:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 24, 2004 21:41:21 GMT -5 Nice write. I love the opening stanza and and the flow.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

Alex'z Death Chic Apprentice \|\| Looks can be deceiving \|\| Posts: 241	Gone Feb 24, 2004 22:29:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Feb 24, 2004 22:29:45 GMT -5 cool. Thanks guys.
	I'm a bad girl only when bad boys want me bad

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Gone Feb 24, 2004 23:11:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 24, 2004 23:11:11 GMT -5 beautiful piece. great job!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

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Post by Eclipse on Feb 25, 2004 15:43:55 GMT -5

i really liked this one.

But now I’m just dreaming of you at night

Somewhere where the sky is bluer than blue

Where the grass is greener under the pouring rain

A silent sanctuary for me and you

i love the flow of that stanza. keep up to good work. ^.^

You saw what you get
If you take what you take.
Look in the eyes of the test.
It's all because...
Now there's a feeling I get.
When I look to the left.
But we can never be sensed.
Our searching for a sign.

amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	Gone Feb 26, 2004 0:18:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Feb 26, 2004 0:18:24 GMT -5 well done!! I like this one
	Amber

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	Gone Feb 26, 2004 14:12:17 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 26, 2004 14:12:17 GMT -5 I like this too, good imagery well constructed words good one, regards Richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

T.J. Barber Administrator Founder I would advise you to stay on my good side!!! Posts: 937	Gone Feb 26, 2004 16:58:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 26, 2004 16:58:11 GMT -5 Interesting piece. Your poetry has a sense unlike any other. I like it. Great Job!
	No man is an island in itself...Therefore, never send for whom the bell tolls. It tolls for the''

Chaotic_Thetis Apprentice Bleed me! For i have witnessed yet remained silent.Slay me! For i had your love and kept it. Posts: 142	Gone Feb 26, 2004 20:32:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Feb 26, 2004 20:32:28 GMT -5 Reads very soft heartedily yet has a very sad under tone to it, nicely done ^_^
	A woman who choses the writing profession often does so as to give herself a rank within a male-dominated society

Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Feb 24, 2004 21:26:54 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 24, 2004 21:30:25 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 24, 2004 21:41:21 GMT -5

Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Feb 24, 2004 22:29:45 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 24, 2004 23:11:11 GMT -5

Post by Eclipse on Feb 25, 2004 15:43:55 GMT -5

Post by amberputis on Feb 26, 2004 0:18:24 GMT -5

Post by richie on Feb 26, 2004 14:12:17 GMT -5

Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 26, 2004 16:58:11 GMT -5

Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Feb 26, 2004 20:32:28 GMT -5